Pitch Feedback

Do you still want to complete/improve and why?

• As a group we would like to add some more examples for our Poster to see if there are any other approaches we can undergo to suit the wants of our target audience, also so our target audience can understand our aims better. 
• We would still want to complete the pitch as there is not a lot of information on our pitch. 
• We would like to improve the lettering designs, giving more examples for the audience to pick from. 
• We would of also liked to have a clear focus on what the title of the short film should be as there was mixed opinions on what our title should be. 

Positive feedback

• The use of the eye with the reflection of the anonymous runner, worked really well according to the feedback, they preferred that draft idea to the other one.
• They liked the choice of colour scheme, as it addresses our location of hollow ponds. 
• The layout of the review was also positive for the audience as the one big image works. 

What points were you able to address?

• The title of the film. 
• Making the colour scheme work and link.